The Sha Ya one is beautiful. I love how you captured her blissful expression at seeing the starry sky Lin Jing had made her.

The Ya Qing one is amazing. That framing with the crow and the feathers is just perfect!

I love Hermione too. The use of those rich colors on the cauldron, and then the line art and lighter colors in the background, create this liminal effect that really suits the magical subject matter.